“请先支付一定的定金”该怎么翻译？

please pay XX%(XX$) as the upfront cost.

Contributor: pkill

你好，软件未注册，请注册。
未注册软件只能使用10天。
注册之后，不再出此提示，谢谢。

Hello, your sofware has not been registered yet, please regiser it first.
Unregistered software can only be used for 10 days.
This reminder will not appear again after registration, Thank you.

[ 本帖最后由 kevinzhou 于 2008-3-11 11:27 编辑 ]

注册支付之后，24小时内收到注册码。

You will receive your registration code within 24 hours after payment.

Contributor: Fly.Hang

Dear Customer,

Thank you for purchasing xxx. We have recently changed the payment platform from Plimus to Paypal for a more convenient payment. Please purchase again.

Thank you for your support and we sincerely apologize for the inconvenience.

With best regards,

XXX

Contributor: Pandora

圣诞了，怎么给用户发一封热情洋溢的信？

Dear VIP customer,

As Christmas is in the corner,
we would like to avail ourselves of this chance
to wish you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year !  

Wishing you every happiness and expressing appreciation
for your cares and concerns during the year.  

We sincerely wish that we will have better and more cooperation during new year 2008 !

ALL THE BEST TO YOU !!


Contributor: enthappy

[ 本帖最后由 kevinzhou 于 2008-3-11 11:35 编辑 ]

让用户填写 "从哪知道的这个软件"

We would therefore appreciate it if you fill this form in as completely as you are

letting me know where you heard about the DVD would be appreciated.

Let us know where everyone heard about us from, we would really appreciate it

we would appreciate it greatly if you would fill in this form

advance for taking the time to fill in our survey, we greatly appreciate it.

Contributor: enthappy

网页正在建设中

http://www.cnsw.org/bbs/thread-78694-1-2.html

Contributor: hingman

如果有什么问题，请与我们联系。

Should you have any concerns, please feel free to let me know.

If you have any further questions, please feel free to contact us

Contributor: 4980, yiyuan

现在，同时购买我们的软件XX和XX，只需要$XX，马上节省$XX。

Pay only $XX to get both XX and XX, save $XX now!

Buy XX and XX for only  $XX, save $XX now!

付款后请发送机器码到xxx at xxx.com或xxx at xxxx.com，以便及时获得注册码。你可以按下“注册”按钮看到“注册码”

To get Register Code/Lisence Key(二选一）, please send your machine code to xxx@xxx.com or xxx@xxxx.com. Click "Register" to get/see the machine code.

Contributor: Pandora